What have I learned?

For my favorite book and chapters, I honestly learned something valuable from each one. I really enjoyed the “They Say, I Say” book because it gave me practical tools that I can actually use in my writing here at Longwood. The part about juxtaposition, how to balance what others say with what I think is especially helpful. I learned that writing doesn’t always have to sound complicated or “academicspeak”; it can be more natural, like “normalspeak,” as long as it’s clear and supported by sources. I also liked learning how to include what peer-reviewed authors say and then respond with my own opinion, whether I agree or disagree. It made academic writing feel more like a conversation.

I also enjoyed “Understanding Rhetoric.” It reminded me of things I learned before, like ethos, pathos, and logos, but in a more creative way. Learning about kairos, the right time and place to say something, was new for me. I liked how the book showed that good writing means putting yourself into your work, almost like taking on a character. It made me think differently about how I communicate.

As for “Academic Writing,” I liked learning about structure, language, and references in different disciplines. I now understand how word choice can strengthen or weaken an argument depending on the discipline you’re writing for. That was very interesting to me.

My least favorite readings were also from “Academic Writing, ” not because they weren’t useful, but because there were just too many words! I’m the kind of person who likes things straight to the point. That’s why I liked “Understanding Rhetoric” more. I don’t always have time for long, wordy explanations; I’d rather have bullet points of the most important things to learn.

I still don’t feel completely confident in my writing ability. I’m a detailed and meticulous person, and I used to have a really good memory, one of the reasons I graduated cum laude in nursing school. But now, I feel like my pre-menopausal symptoms sometimes interfere with the details I try to remember. I can usually recall the main idea or the “gist,” but not word-for-word, which makes me feel less confident in my writing. My weaknesses are paraphrasing, grammar, and expanding on my ideas. My plan is to keep practicing, continue reading about grammar, and work on writing more regularly until it becomes more natural and I gain back my confidence.

 

Blog Post 6

After reading the assigned books in this class, I have found myself looking at things through a new lens in which I did not originally think of. The Understanding Rhetoric book provides insight into how to cite, how to write, and how to amplify your writing in a fun way. Chapter 3 of UR gave insight into how to characterize yourself into your writing without putting on a fake persona. I found this chapter to be extremely useful and more informational than the others as it describes how we are our ourselves and nothing can change that (pg. 124). I have a hard time adding personality to my writing, I always find it easier to simply sound professional because that is just how I write. While this is okay, it is also necessary to incorporate some aspects that differentiate you from yourself and others. Books such as They Say/I Say have not necessarily helped me in my writing. The chapters in the book have not applied to my writing in such a way that I need to read them again.

I find my strengths to be that of prolonging my points to reach the word counts. It is very easy for me to write about things for a long period of time because I find it simple to rephrase things and add words to my sentences. I do have hardships when it comes to being repetitive. I repeat a lot of the same things when writing, however, I make up for it with my rephrasing. I feel like my overall writing is decent. I try and be very profound with my words and I want to sound as professional as possible which can sometimes lead to me babbling on about things with no necessary meaning behind what I write. When this happens, I allow myself to reread and restructure what I have written in order to make sure it all makes sense. Overall, I plan to talk less in a professional way and more in a way that is applicable to the overall topics I am writing about. Doing so will amplify my writing and make it so that everything is understandable and that it all connects.

 
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Blog 5

As Sarah was heading back from break, she was sad to be leaving her family. I completely understood how she felt because I was also sad to leave my family, but at the same time, I was ready to get back to my new normal at school. After spending four days at home, it felt nice to come back to campus to settle back into my routine. There’s something comforting about being in your own space and getting back into the rhythm of college life. 

Since I have my own room, I can’t relate to how Sarah feels about having a roommate. I imagine it must be both fun and challenging, but I enjoy having my own space for when I want to have alone time and study without distractions. I love living in a suite though because I get the best of both worlds, privacy when I need it and company when I want to hang out. 

As of now, I’m in the middle of planning for my spring classes, which has been a bit stressful. Trying to figure out what classes I need to take, while also making sure none of them overlap in time. Even though it’s a bit of a puzzle, it’s exciting to see my schedule coming together and to plan ahead. 

I’ve noticed that my experience at a small school is different from what Sarah experiences at her larger school. My classes usually have 15 to 25 students, which makes it easier to build relationships with professors and classmates. I also love that my campus is small enough that I can walk from one end to the other in about ten minutes. It’s nice not having to rush across long distances between classes like students at bigger schools often do. 

While making new friends here I still try to keep up with my friends back home. It is not always easy since everyone’s schedules are different, but I still try my best to talk to them. With Thanksgiving and winter break coming up, I know I will miss being here and seeing my college friends every day. But, I am also looking forward to being home again, spending time with family, catching up with my high school friends, and working to earn back some of the money I have spent this semester. But, Longwood has definitely become more of a second home to me.

 
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Blog 5

As I return from fall break, I feel very refreshed and motivated to continue my schoolwork. Although I was only at home for Thursday and Friday, I can pick up on the similarities of my own break experience compared to Sarah’s. Like her, it felt a little weird being at home with my parents and siblings. Not in a bad way, but I felt as if I had missed so many things going on in their lives that I needed a big debriefing session. 

Unlike Sarah however, I do know when to register and what classes I am going to take. Because I participate in ROTC, I am required to make a 4 year schedule of the classes I plan to take. This has helped me stay on track and has made registering and planning for classes much easier. After being at Longwood for around two months, not much is new and I feel like I do know the campus and the things that go on pretty well. 

When it comes to the differences with her big school experience versus a smaller school I haven’t really noticed too much. It seems as though everything is pretty much the same, just with less people. There are still always new things and activities going on throughout campus. 

I do kinda feel myself drifting a bit away from my hometown friends like Sarah does. Being away from them for so long causes both sides to miss out on all the little daily news bits that make somebody your best friend. It is kinda bittersweet to think about, as we both are moving onto different chapters in our lives. I still try my best to keep in touch with them as often as I can though. 

I honestly haven’t thought too much about the breaks that are approaching. I really enjoy it here and have a great friend group so I don’t really care to go home much. I find myself getting bored easier at home. When you live with your friends it makes it much easier to find something to do, especially on a college campus where there is always something to do or someone to hang out with.

It is interesting to see the similarities and differences that I have with Sarah. It has helped me understand that some of the things I think and feel are just common occurrences for all freshmen, making me feel better about things when I don’t think they are going well.



 
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Blog 4 Post

Sarah seems to be doing slightly better with classes. I have adjusted to all my classes pretty well I still feel challenged in class but my professors are very helpful. Sarah is also currently dealing with a break up. She went through a major identity crisis after her boyfriend broke up with her. I have not gone through anything drastic like she did. The only thing that is making me feel the way she does is all of my schoolwork. Sarah has started going out with her friends and attending activities. She went camping with her roommate Liz and had a good time. I have been going to do stuff with my friends, although we haven’t gone camping, we have gone to the Twin Lakes.

When Sarah leaves for home I think she feels slightly relieved but also stressed because of Ben. When she gets home she gets to see her friends. She is beyond excited but then she gets bad news that Ben would to be moving to New York in the summer, which was sooner than expected. If I were her I would’ve felt the same way she did, disappointed. For the most part her Thanksgiving break seemed good. Although, Ben did make an appearance and she made the situation quite awkward. I can relate to Sarah is this situation, it is always so nerve racking seeing your ex after the breakup. Unlike Sarah, I am so excited to go home for break. I miss my family and friends so much. Thankfully I don’t have to run into any ex-boyfriend over break. Sarah was quite sad to leave her hometown. I think it might also be hard for me to come back after break because I miss having my own space.

I feel like Sarah’s college experience is quite different from mine. She seems slightly introverted; I am the complete opposite. I love going out with my friends on the weekend and I enjoy meeting new people. Sarah has a few friends but she seems to stay in her small group. I think Sarah’s experience at a larger campus has lots of differences in comparison to Longwood. At Longwood, it is quite easy to make friends because you tend to see a lot of the same people in the same day. In comparison, larger universities, like Sarah’s, it isn’t as common to see the same people because there are lots of students and the classes are bigger. I think Sarah would thrive at a place like Longwood because it would give her an opportunity to become more involved and become more social.

 
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Blog Post 4

My experiences compare with those of Sarah’s in the sense that I out myself out there and attended social events which ultimately led to joining clubs. I compare myself similarly with Sarah’s hangouts with friends as she is always with someone close to her. I find myself more inclined to be with my friends than on my own, which aided in the attendance of social events as I made numerous friendships and communicated with others. I also struggled finding out how to register for classes, as described on page 141, which led to difficulty in receiving the classes I truly wanted. I have a hard time with electronics and I believe Sarah was similar to me in this way.

As the holidays near, I find myself excited and sad at the same time. I love being here at Longwood and spending time with my friends that I have made throughout the semester. I am scared of the class changes, I truly love all of my classes this semester and I can’t seem to find myself changing them. On the other hand, I am extremely excited to go back to my hometown and see my friends and family there. I absolutely love my family and being able to spend a good amount of time with them will heal my soul in a way. I miss going out places in my hometown, which I will be able to revisit once the holidays near. I will definitely feel weird returning to college after getting used to my hometown again, but it is not something I haven’t experienced before and so I believe it will be much simpler.

A larger University compared to Longwood would cause me lots of distress. I believe I would not be able to find my way around the campus and get acclimated to my surroundings easily. This small campus really gives me the feeling of home, even if there is not much to do. I understand how Sarah feels as she is always with her friends and I find that the smaller campus life makes me closer to my friends as it does for her. I appreciate the simple and quiet setting, making it better for me school wise.

 
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How my personal experiences compare to Sarah’s

     Reading the book Freshman Year by Sarah Mai has definitely made me think about my very own college experiences and how alike mine and Sarah’s are. Similar to Sarah, I have continued to face many challenges and life shifts during my first semester here at Longwood. Reading how she goes through her classes, to making new friends, and even to the adjustment of living with a roommate has helped me think about my personal journey so far.

     One part from the book that reflected with me was attempting to manage the stress of everything happening at once. From classes, to different social events and clubs, to even time spent by myself. It takes a lot to juggle all of it because it is still so new. Being at Longwood, I have also had to work on “work life balance” as they say.  It is difficult trying to pick between hanging out with friends from the hallway or studying for that test you have tomorrow. There have been times that assignments from my classes have piled up and it just feels like I do not have enough time to get everything done. Similar to Sarah, I have had to maneuver being more organized and having more time management and knowing when to do assignments.

     As the semester comes to a close in a few months, I imagine looking forward to Christmas and the holidays. Being able to go home for winter break helps to bring me a lot of personal relief and it helps to get me excited to see family. However, I can also understand Sarah’s point of view because she feels very uneasy about returning home after how much has changed in her life since being at college. Being here at Longwood has definitely made me a more independent person and I can understand why she believes that home might not have that same magic as when we were kids. Now, something to keep in mind is that my experience here at Longwood might be different than Sarah’s because I am part of a smaller university. 

     In the book, the college also seemed to be very huge and overwhelming to her. Here at Longwood, it is easy to meet new people and I just feel like I am more part of a community. The Professors are always willing to help and the campus helps Longwood feel more personal to me. I think that being at a smaller school has helped me adjust more smoothly into college life unlike a larger university might make me feel. 

     In conclusion, reading the book about Sarah’s freshman semester has helped me realize that many students go through similar situations and feelings. While some specifics may be different between us, the feeling of uncertainty and independence seems very universal. I am excited for the upcoming break this upcoming December and to see how far I can grow here between now and then.

 

What Ive learned through research

It is a crazy feeling to know that I’ve already been in college for five weeks, the time here has truly flung bye. I think back to a few months ago when I was dreading coming to school, knowing that I had a challenging course load I didn’t know if I was ready or prepared to even start this new chapter of my life. The past few weeks I have grown more as a person and learned more about myself than in my entire life. I’ve learned that although my classes are challenging I am capable of pursuing this career. I can see myself in the personable future using all the knowledge I have learned so far. Whether it be from building my knowledge and understanding in learning a new language or using what I’ve learned about research in our past annotated bibliography. Before Longwood I had barely done any sort of research when it came to the APA formatting. I was able to learn many things using the greenwood library to help find good and reliable sources I could count on in my essay. With the assignment I now feel way more comfortable when it comes to finding sources and being able to narrow down the difference between a good and bad source. By reading the Understanding Rhetoric book I’m also confident in defining what a good primary and secondary sources are. I still think that I could use some work on paraphrasing, I’m not 100% confident on whether or not I am doing it correctly or not. That is one thing I believe would be beneficial is for me to look more in depth about ways to paraphrase without plagiarizing. Over these weeks I’m proud to have grown my knowledge in research and be able to apply it to nursing assignments in the future.

 

 

My college experience compared to Sarah’s

It is still hard to believe that I have made it this far already. I was so used to being told that college was just a harder level, and that the only way to survive is by just focusing on school. Week 6 just started, and I honestly wish that a day had more than 24 hours. There is just so much for me to do that I have been staying busy every single day, trying to complete all of my homework on time, and studying for any upcoming quizzes, or tests. But even though it takes dedication, I still enjoy it more, due to the fact that I can take everything at my own pace.

My suitemates and I, often gather together to eat at a certain time, so that we can take a break from classes, to interact with each other. I take some time to either go to the gym or play field hockey, as a way to continue maintaining myself active. It also helps me from losing my mind with all of my assignments  that I have to do. I figured that, the more busy I am, the less homesick I feel. And even though I don’t live as far as Sarah does from her family, I still have the urge to visit them every weekend. They are truly my real friends. So I am very excited for fall break because they can finally hear all the details about my life here at longwood.

When Sarah was having a identity crisis, I somewhat identified myself with her at the beginning of the semester. I used to be worried about me not being able to fit in, not as capable of keeping up with my classes, or not knowing what I really wanted to do with my life, but as the weeks pass by, I got more comfortable with everything. It is all about balance and discipline. So far school has been great for me, because I am finally where I have been wanting to be at. The first required step in becoming a veterinarian.

 

Research goes a long way

In my short five weeks here at Longwood, I am realizing how important research is to my academic success here. In high school I hadn’t done any research at all so this was all new to me. What I have learned so far is helping me get the confidence I need to tackle any and all research projects. In the future I see myself researching with some of the biology professors on whatever they are doing. The only thing that I am lacking in is the ability to put my thoughts into words. Researching a subject is relatively easy but having to explain it to other people is difficult for me. When I do write about the article or paper I’m looking at I’m so scared that I accidentally plagiarized in my paper. So if there is one thing that I want to take away from this class it is how to not accidentally plagiarize in my papers. I am very comfortable finding sources to help back up my claims. I am also very comfortable distinguishing primary sources from secondary sources. But I will occasionally use a secondary source if it helps back up my claims. I have learned about asking a research question like not making it too broad and not making too narrow. It is about the thin line in between that two but I do struggle with making my research question too narrow. My journey at Longwood has equipped me with essential research skills, but it’s has also informed me of where I can improve. I’m excited about the chance of conducting research projects that challenge me and add on to my academic experience. With continued practice, I’m confident I’ll become a more better and effective researcher ready to contribute to the already expanding world of science and the human body.