What I’ve Learned-blog post #6

Looking back on what I’ve learned thus far in English 165 I wouldn’t be able to fit it into this blog. I’ve loved reading books like the They Say, I Say as well as excerpts from Academic Writing. Honestly I have a love hate relationship with my writing. Some days I think im doing great cranking out at least 3 pages of writing, other days I can barely write a sentence. My writing though I would say has improved a lot, learning lots about research and how to find good credible sources. As well as learning how to right in a new format with APA when i was preciously used to MLA format. I see my strengths in writing being mainly having a distinctive voice in tone. When I look at my writing compared to others I can really see myself and distinctly recognize my writing. I’m good at taking my thoughts and putting it on the page even though sometimes it turns into a ramble. My weakness is definitely citing my sources, all though I have definitely gotten better over the first half of the semester it’s still a work in process. Overcoming this weakness of mine is going to be a long process I can already tell. I rarely have the patience to take the time and learn the formatting. But I believe switching over to the new formatting of APA I will eventually get used to citing my sources that way. I would say my knowledge of Structure Language, References in the four disciplines are very limited. I only know a few different things about the scientific view because most sources related to nursing fall within that. I definitely need to grow my knowledge before the final because I know that it mostly revolves around that and using your writing throughout the semester to back up your information.

 

Blog Post #6

Throughout the semester I have had the opportunity to get to know myself through writing, especially in blog posts. So far, my favorite reading has been chapter 3 in Understanding Rhetoric. This chapter is about writing identity. I enjoyed reading chapter 3 because I learned how writers can change their identity based on the audience. I don’t have a specific reading I do not like but, most of the chapters in “They Say, I Say,” are a little more boring compared to “Understanding Rhetoric”. Overall, the readings from this semester are all very useful when it comes to improving writing skills. Although I thought some of the readings were boring, I have used lots of the information from each chapter within in my writing. I feel like over the span of this semester my writing has improved. I have learned how to use APA format along with in-text citations. I do still feel as though my writing could use some improvement. I tend to repeat the same idea just with different words, which isn’t engaging for the reader. I also have an issue of going into too much detail with certain topics and I end up rambling. On the other hand, I feel as though I am good at getting my point across and backing up my statements with research. I have also improved on citations. In order to overcome my weaknesses in writing I plan on continuing to practice and asking for help from my professors and even the writing center. As of right now, I know a quite a bit about structure, language, and references. I know with each of the four disciplines have different structures. With the humanities discipline writers use MLA or CMS when writing. Using language in a humanities paper would be more academic but still engaging. Lastly, references in a humanity-based writing is going to include citations in the format of MLA style.

 
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Blog Post 6

Since this semester has begun, I have learned both new things and more about other topics. The books we have been reading and the quizzes that follow are both helping me get a better understanding of the chapters. My favorite book we have been reading besides Freshmen Year has to be the Understanding Rhetoric. I tend to like graphic books more and have enjoyed them for years. My favorite chapter of Understanding Rhetoric has to be chapter one. The reason I like the chapter so much is due to the fact that it uses philosophical figure such as Aristotle and Plato to explain what each thought rhetoric was, since they disagreed on the subject. It uses past and current societies to explain what ethos, pathos and logos are. My least favorite book we have been reading definitely has to be They say, I say. There’s no specific chapter or part that comes to mind that I dislike. The way I feel about my writing is neutral. I don’t think I’m a good or bad writer. This is because I am good at genres like nonfiction and fantasy and am terrible at more scientific and formal settings when I write. I find it hard to write about a topic if I’m uninterested in it which tends to happen a lot. I plan to work on my writing in genres I am less comfortable in so I can learn how to write formally. This will help me in future settings as formal writing is used in schools and careers. I have mostly written in all my assignments about the social sciences and humanities since all my desired career paths are in those two fields. I know the SLR grid involves what citations are used in each discipline. I know that understanding the SLR grid can help me become a better writer since I will know what discipline requires what and how I can relay information correctly.

 
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Blog Post #6, What have I learned?

I was never terrible at writing, but I cannot say I was the best at it either. I did not understand why this class was mandatory for freshman until I had spent some time in it. I can say I have seen a few changes in my writing, but they are positive changes, my writing is now more up to the right standards. It is not as perfect as it could be, but it is definitely better than before. I have learned how to properly do citations, how my topic sentence should look like, to stay on topic, include what is important, and that I need a good hook in order to captivate the reader’s attention. Although citations were my least favorite thing to learn. Something important to keep in mind when writing is that every class will be different, especially if they are from different areas, for example: Humanities, Social Sciences, Natural Sciences and Applied Sciences. Not only have I learned how to improve my own writing, but I have learned how to help someone else improve theirs too! I learned that I cannot do it for them, but I can help lead them in the right direction with my feedback. When you are giving feedback, it is crucial that you do not try to force your writing style onto them, do not give bias feedback, and give as many details as possible so that they know exactly what it is that they need to work on or go back and review. Once I get a hang of what to write about, I think I can write up something decently good, my issue is having enough creativity to create a hook strong enough to reel the reader in. I will admit, it is not as hard as it seems to be it is just that I unfortunately procrastinate to the last few days before it is due. Therefore, I feel more pressure to get it done and probably do not do as good of a job as I could have if I had done it earlier. If I do happen to struggle with remembering how to do something I can always go back to my books Understanding Rhetoric, Academic Writing and They Say, I Say. Thankfully, they are not hard to read and understand. The semester is not over yet, so I hope to improve my writing a bit more as it progresses!

 
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Blog Post #6

As this fall semester comes to a close, I have been thinking about what I have learned so far in English 165 and how my knowledge of writing has changed. When I first began the class I believed that I knew how to write effectively however, as I went through classes I learned that there is so much more to writing than I thought.

However, after reading through the books “Understanding Rhetoric”, “They Say, I Say”, and Academic writing, I have been able to understand that writing is so much more than that. Now I understand that writing is a form of communication and it allows people to express ideas and thoughts.

One of my favorite chapters from the book, “Understanding Rhetoric”, is chapter 1. I really enjoyed coming back to the topic of ethos, pathos, and logos because I honestly forgot about these topics since we discussed them at the beginning of my high school career. I also found it interesting reading about all the historical figures like Plato, Aristotle, and Cicero and their personal opinions about the topic. Although I found this interesting, it was also pretty interesting to see how far back in time these rhetorical devices really go. 

However, one of my least favorite chapters would have to be Chapter 7 which focused on “Reading and Writing in the Humanities”. Even though I understand that this is important information to know, I found it very unconnected from my personal writing experience and major. For example, I found it interesting that the humanities use Chicago and MLA as their style guides but, I also found this unrelated to my major being business where we use APA. However, I know that being able to understand writing from other view points is important because I have learned that writing is a form of communication.

My current strengths are being able to organize ideas and be able to flow clearly between my paragraphs. However, I think I need to work on my ability to edit and proofread after I write. I plan to improve on being able to proofread more effectively and use the feedback from my professors and peers to better improve my writing.

Right now I have learned that being able to write across different majors and careers requires special kinds of styles, languages, and structures that better fit that particular field of work. Every career sees writing differently but they all share the same ideas of communicating clearly and efficiently. Being able to understand these differences has helped to expand my portfolio as a writer and be able to adjust my style to fit different academic classes and situations.

 

Blog Post 6

After reading the assigned books in this class, I have found myself looking at things through a new lens in which I did not originally think of. The Understanding Rhetoric book provides insight into how to cite, how to write, and how to amplify your writing in a fun way. Chapter 3 of UR gave insight into how to characterize yourself into your writing without putting on a fake persona. I found this chapter to be extremely useful and more informational than the others as it describes how we are our ourselves and nothing can change that (pg. 124). I have a hard time adding personality to my writing, I always find it easier to simply sound professional because that is just how I write. While this is okay, it is also necessary to incorporate some aspects that differentiate you from yourself and others. Books such as They Say/I Say have not necessarily helped me in my writing. The chapters in the book have not applied to my writing in such a way that I need to read them again.

I find my strengths to be that of prolonging my points to reach the word counts. It is very easy for me to write about things for a long period of time because I find it simple to rephrase things and add words to my sentences. I do have hardships when it comes to being repetitive. I repeat a lot of the same things when writing, however, I make up for it with my rephrasing. I feel like my overall writing is decent. I try and be very profound with my words and I want to sound as professional as possible which can sometimes lead to me babbling on about things with no necessary meaning behind what I write. When this happens, I allow myself to reread and restructure what I have written in order to make sure it all makes sense. Overall, I plan to talk less in a professional way and more in a way that is applicable to the overall topics I am writing about. Doing so will amplify my writing and make it so that everything is understandable and that it all connects.

 
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Blog Post 6: What Have You Learned

Thus far, we’ve been focusing on the graphic novel Freshman, and we’ll return to it one last time before the semester ends. Now, however, is time to start thinking about what you’ve learned thus far in Engl 165 and what are still your biggest concerns with completing the semester successfully.

To accomplish this, look back on the chapters that your’ve read in both the Understanding Rhetoric and the They Say, I Say books, as well as the chapters we’ve completed in Academic Writing. Consider the following questions to guide your response, or go out on your own:

  1. What have been your favorite chapters thus far and why? (Give details)
  2. What have been your least favorite chapters thus far and why? (Give details)
  3. How do you honestly feel about your own writing?
  4. Where do you see your strengths?
  5. Where do you see your weaknesses?
  6. What kind of plan to you have to overcome your perceived weaknesses?
  7. What do you know thus far about Structure, Language, and References in the four disciplines that constitute academic writing.
 
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Blog#5

I feel like the fall break was short, just like Thanksgiving break can be. It felt good to be back to get ready for the midterms and get a head start on my school work, so I do not fall behind on any of the material I need to know. And I kinda missed my roommates and have gotten really busy since being back. But being home for break made me miss home a lot more than I normally do, and over time it will get easier for me to come to school are break. My advisor had a meeting as a group talking about registering for classes next semester, and that was helpful, and I honestly did nto know before that when I was supposed to register for my classes in the spring. And I’m hoping that I’ll be able to get my biology and American Sign Language classes at the times I want them, and possibly I might change my major, but hasnt fully decided if I will be making the change yet, it just depends on the rest of the semester goers for me. And I have not fully explored campus yet, and I still don’t know where a lot of the buildings I will or possibly need for future classes and I have only visited half of the campus. I am too busy to explore the campus area. And compared to sarah experiences, I am grateful for picking a somewhat small school, and Longwood is very cozy and quiet, so it’s not that stressful compared to sarah big Midwest school. And I think some people, when picking a college they don’t think about the size of the campus or the population of people. I didn’t have many friends in high so, so it hasn’t really affected me going to college and the friends I do have I see on the weekend when I go home for the weekend and get to hang out with them. And I do dorm with 2 friends from high school and also my cousin, so I don’t feel as im drifting that much from everyone. I feel like it will be good going home for the two breaks that are coming up to spend time with friends and family, and celebrating the holidays with them will be a nice change. And this year will be my first few holidays I will spend with my boyfriend. 

 
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Do YOU Know When You Register

Coming back from break felt a lot like what Sarah is going through in the book, that weird mix of excitement and exhaustion. Being home was nice because everything felt familiar again. My own bed, my family, and not having to worry about my school work. Even though I only got 2 days of fall break, coming back here to be with my teammates was so much fun! It was strange coming back to my dorm and adjusting to sharing space with my roommate again. Luckily, no dead fish situation here, but it definitely took a day or two to get back into my routine. Registration is coming up soon, and I’m already stressing a little about getting the classes I want. I’ve been looking at my schedule and trying to balance what I need for my major with things that actually sound interesting. It still feels like there’s a lot about college that’s brand new, like how fast time goes by, and how different professors can be with their expectations. Sarah’s experience at her big midwestern school seems a lot more chaotic than mine here at Longwood. I actually like that Longwood is smaller. I feel like it’s easier to get to know people, and professors actually remember your name. I don’t think I’d like being one of thousands of students in a lecture hall. Since being here, I’ve noticed that I eat dinner super early or super late due to late-night practices. I also see that I only talk to my two best friends from my high school. With Christmas break coming up soon, I am looking forward to seeing them and my family. I don’t get a spring break because of cheer, which sucks, but at least I get to be with my friends. It’s also weird to think about being gone from Longwood for that long. I’ve started to feel like this place is my new normal. Looking ahead, I want to finish my freshman year strong. I’m planning to stay on top of assignments, manage my time better, and make sure I still make time for friends and self-care. College has already taught me a lot about balance, and I think Sarah and I are both figuring that out in our own ways.

 
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Blog 5

As Sarah was heading back from break, she was sad to be leaving her family. I completely understood how she felt because I was also sad to leave my family, but at the same time, I was ready to get back to my new normal at school. After spending four days at home, it felt nice to come back to campus to settle back into my routine. There’s something comforting about being in your own space and getting back into the rhythm of college life. 

Since I have my own room, I can’t relate to how Sarah feels about having a roommate. I imagine it must be both fun and challenging, but I enjoy having my own space for when I want to have alone time and study without distractions. I love living in a suite though because I get the best of both worlds, privacy when I need it and company when I want to hang out. 

As of now, I’m in the middle of planning for my spring classes, which has been a bit stressful. Trying to figure out what classes I need to take, while also making sure none of them overlap in time. Even though it’s a bit of a puzzle, it’s exciting to see my schedule coming together and to plan ahead. 

I’ve noticed that my experience at a small school is different from what Sarah experiences at her larger school. My classes usually have 15 to 25 students, which makes it easier to build relationships with professors and classmates. I also love that my campus is small enough that I can walk from one end to the other in about ten minutes. It’s nice not having to rush across long distances between classes like students at bigger schools often do. 

While making new friends here I still try to keep up with my friends back home. It is not always easy since everyone’s schedules are different, but I still try my best to talk to them. With Thanksgiving and winter break coming up, I know I will miss being here and seeing my college friends every day. But, I am also looking forward to being home again, spending time with family, catching up with my high school friends, and working to earn back some of the money I have spent this semester. But, Longwood has definitely become more of a second home to me.

 
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